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Mr. Blonde
Posted: September 8th, 2012, 3:27pm Report to Moderator
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What good are choices if they're all bad?

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Up. Thank you, Gary, for helping me out. You spotted some good things I didn't even notice. Hopefully, it's to your guys' liking.


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mcornetto
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Good stuff, Blonde.  Quite dense but interesting nonetheless.  

Just woke up here, so I'll update things once I have a cuppa.  

It's alffy's turn.  
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mcornetto
Posted: September 8th, 2012, 8:05pm Report to Moderator
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Everything is updated.  Email is sent.  

Looking forward to seeing where alffy takes us next.
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Mr. Blonde
Posted: September 8th, 2012, 8:23pm Report to Moderator
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Just a heads up, Michael. Burt Bell is 46. Nothing that has to be altered this second, though. =)


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Well done sir.
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Oh, man... Both my characters dead.

I quite liked this one actually. Really opens it up for the next person.
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mcornetto
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No word from alffy yet and his 24 hrs is nearly up.   ReneC should get ready because it might be his turn a bit early.  
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Posted: September 9th, 2012, 9:50pm Report to Moderator
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ReneC is up.   Apparently, alffy is lost in space.
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Oh, I see what you did there, Michael... =)

Alffy did say that he hadn't actually caught up with the story yet. It probably takes the whole 48 hours just to figure out what the hell is going on in this crazy Mars colony.


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Okay guys sorry for the silence but I'm currently dying with 'Man Flu'.  I gather I've missed my turn so do I get to go after ReneC?

I'll read through everything and work on my next character, Michael.  I won't do my part yet as I'm not sure if I'm still next or not.  With the way I'm feeling I reckon I'll be pulling a sickie tomorrow so I could defo get a bit done then.

Anyway, let me know if you can Michael and sorry again.


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Right I've read through it and....Jez! What the hell is with the crazy bondage chick Valentino! lol.  One wonders what goes on in Jordan's (the boy who could fly) head?

I've had to make some notes as it's getting a bit hard to follow with some writers suggesting a few sneaky sub-plots.

Liking it so far though and hopefully I'll pull through this flu to see the end lol.


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George Willson
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I'm casually reading it through until I actually to deal with it, myself since I get to go last. Figure there's little point in sorting out much of anything until it is my turn to try to make sense of it.


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Working on my pages now.


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Hey Michael, I finally had a good look at the map, and for the first time, noticed you had the names of the deceased hiding out in the background. Further study revealed you have lines pointing to the places where they were made to be deceased. Useful info, I would say, for tracking purposes. If I may be so bold as to suggest, you should use a different color for them. Red on red is rather unfriendly and makes their lines somewhat difficult to trace at a glance. Just saying.


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PATRICIA HEMSWORTH (44, Mess Cook)

Born in Iceland to immensely rich parents, Patricia never wanted for anything while growing up. She lived the Richie Rich lifestyle, buying and investing on a whim but with the heart and conscience her older brother, Oliver, never exhibited. She tried to get along with Oliver and always looked out for him, but it was like mixing oil and vinegar. Worse, she was the clear favourite of her parents.

When she was 30, her parents were killed by a devastating volcanic eruption in the Phillipines. Despite their will leaving the majority of the estate to Patricia, as the eldest heir her brother used his power and political connections to wrest the entire estate away from her, including her own assets and accounts. Worse, he ruined her reputation, burning every political connection she had.

Penniless and thoroughly cut off from her former life, Patricia was forced to start fresh with a menial job as a school cafeteria cook. She excelled, as she did in everything, and soon was running her own catering business in the US. But just as success seemed imminent, her brother once again took it all away from her, buying or sabotaging whatever he could of her business.

Around that time, an opportunity for a mess cook opened up on Mars. She jumped at the chance, hoping her brother's reach would not extend to another planet, and has spent the last two years keeping a low profile in the Mars Colony.


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