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MBCgirl
Posted: November 6th, 2008, 12:23am Report to Moderator
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Whoa Nelly!  Sandra my dear...you are a creative one and I just have to laugh...where the hell is all this coming from???????

I feel like I fell downthe rabbit hole and I can't get out! *wink*

I thought Cornetto died too...but then I wasn't sure...maybe it's my simple mind...but I am lost at sea.........

~m~


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Sandra Elstree.
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Whoa Nelly!  Sandra my dear...you are a creative one and I just have to laugh...where the hell is all this coming from???????

I feel like I fell downthe rabbit hole and I can't get out! *wink*

I thought Cornetto died too...but then I wasn't sure...maybe it's my simple mind...but I am lost at sea.........

~m~


I don't have a clue!! LOL, but if you find out, PLEASE, FILL ME IN!!!

Sandra




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Sandra, I would love a bag of whatever it is you have.
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Sandra Elstree.
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Sandra, I would love a bag of whatever it is you have.


You give me a bag of what you've got, and I'll give you some coffee and we'll call it even.

Sandra




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I feel like I fell downthe rabbit hole and I can't get out! *wink*


I think I'm the one that fell down the rabbit hole.

The track sheet is updated and emails are sent.
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Sandra Elstree.
Posted: November 6th, 2008, 2:47am Report to Moderator
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I think I'm the one that fell down the rabbit hole.

The track sheet is updated and emails are sent.


You DID! You fell through the floor down to the Dream Engine Room!

Well, ... at least you got to change your avatar!

Big Hugs and Love to you Michael and all of our Cast!

Sandra



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Sandra,

That was a nice written part you had there. It made me laugh at the scene where me and Gabriel wave at the audience. That was one hell of a good element.

It is good to see you moved the story forward with the ghost things - since i messed it up, killing Gabriel for a second time. But your part gives my part a sense hehehe.

Well done.

Michael, what's this thing with you avatars. No matter how much you struggle my avatar is the best

See, Sandra? Joker is clapping his hands congratulating about your wonderful part. Also it's clapping for Michael who came up with this Killer Game idea.

cheers



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Posted: November 6th, 2008, 3:41am Report to Moderator
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My lovely Dana, you wrote your part so fast. I liked it. Actually it reminded me of Ste's character, and i'm waiting for Ste's turn. C'mon Ste.

I enjoyed it Dana, and i still can't believe how good this game is coming out.

Ohh, Joker is clapping for you too.



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Nicely done Dana.  I appreciate you getting us back on track.  I loved the reveal with Zadora.  

I am definitely down the rabbit hole.  But it looks like I'm not dead yet.  I just going to let you guys go with it. We will take care of these extra bodies.

Bush is up next and let's just hope that he doesn't fall down that rabbit hole too.

EDIT: Tracksheet is updated and emails are sent.

Because of the rule I made earlier about Dana and Morgan being an extension of Zadora's character I had to count  the kill for Zadora.  I just thought that was the only fair thing to do.  Everyone ok with that?    

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Michael, I don't think the tracksheet's updated for me. Still showing Yohn being next and everyone's off to the bar.


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Michael, I don't think the tracksheet's updated for me. Still showing Yohn being next and everyone's off to the bar.


That's why Gabriel got killed twice. I had the same problem.



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mcornetto
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Try refreshing the page.  If that doesn't work you can clear your browser cache.  You can also always get the current tracksheet at http://www.freewebs.com/mixelpixel/tracksheet.jpg
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Sandra Elstree.
Posted: November 6th, 2008, 4:39am Report to Moderator
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Nicely done Dana.  I appreciate you getting us back on track.  I loved the reveal with Zadora.  

I am definitely down the rabbit hole.  But it looks like I'm not dead yet.  I just going to let you guys go with it. We will take care of these extra bodies.

Bush is up next and let's just hope that he doesn't fall down that rabbit hole too.

EDIT: Tracksheet is updated and emails are sent.

Because of the rule I made earlier about Dana and Morgan being an extension of Zadora's character I had to count  the kill for Zadora.  I just thought that was the only fair thing to do.  Everyone ok with that?    


Michael, ...

You are our darling and no matter what stuff we pull on you...

I will bow down and worship you!!!!


Love and big Kavana!!!!

Sandra




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MBCgirl
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Crap!  Micheal put his closes back on, fell down the rabbit hole and now he IS a Rabbit! Not just any rabbit mind you...but a bunny rabbit that is skipping along!

Great job Dana...although I think with the way Dana and Zadora have been circling each other throughout this exercise, it would have made more sense had their been some play on this earlier...but I like the premise for sure...

Sorry about my logical brain... lol


http://www.myspace.com/mbcgirl  

I love words and the fact that when the page is blank...there's nothing there until words are formulated in my brain. Those thoughts...rushing through my viens and out my finger tips, find "life" on the page.  

When people and places come to life...that to me is exciting.


MBCgirl =)
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