Wow, I'm literally speechless after Sandra's post.  There were a number of words I'm not even familiar with...is it just me?  Simply wild!  I actually think there's some interesting and good writing here, but really, really whacked out.  There definitely must be something in that Albertan air...

Amazingly quick post, Dana...adn well done also.  Someinteresting new angles here. I do agree with MBC though that this new backstory doesn't really make any sense based on what's been said earlier.  I do like it though...it just needs to be inserted much earlier.  Good job though!

OK, so now it's back to me.  We've had some cold winds blowing down from Canada lately.  Something seems to be taking over my mind...my thoughts...my...

Get ready for the return of the Pyramid Portal Opener...

Watch as the Dream Engine kicks into high gear...

Sit back and sing along as the entire cast comes out for salty versions of "Edelweiss" and "The Sound of Music".

And prepare yourselves to be amazed as the SS Craven sprouts wings and flies off into the Heavens...

(What do you think of that, Sandra?)

Well I think that's generally one of the downfalls of this kind of exercise, you can't really go back and add in foreshadowing and other little hints. But i think given what we have so far it works fine *shrugs*

Sweet baby Jesus, what's going on here? I'm now past confused and entered a realm much deeper...probably somewhere in Sandra's head, so there's no coming back lol.

Yohn, great writing, it was very funny.

Sandra, what can I say, you've outdone yourself again. What a weird and wonderful life you must live in, perhaps you should visit us sometime lol. Only joking, I actually thought it was great.

Dana, nicely done. Bringing things back into focus.

Things are motoring now but I'm also worried about when my turn is, if I have another? I'm at a wedding on Saturday so I might be pushed to write anything. Unless of course I can get a seat at the back of the church and sneak my laptop in. Don't think I can afford to miss a day without checking in.

Alffy, you already had your second turn a while ago. Enjoy the wedding.  But whatever you do, be careful of rabbit holes.

I was wondering about another go because I thought we only got two goes each but there's still seems much more to go. I'll be sure to watch out for rabbit holes too. What's your avatar from? Is it Peter Rabbit or something? Kinda reminds me of 'Watership Down' too. That film just makes me cry like a baby though lol. There's only so many times you can use the 'no, it's just something in my eye' routine.

Dana, I loved the slip into the back story of Dana and Zadora and the transition from this into the bar with the light!

Alffy, the rabbit is from Alice in Wonderland

Dreamscale, I love what you might have planned!

Sandra

Quoted from mcornetto Nicely done Yohn. Lots of suspense In that one.  I'm not sure who was killed though.  I guess becoming undead sort of counts but...? Sandra is up next, so everybody fasten their seatbelts.  It's going to be a bumpy night.

Yeah I thought I'd go a different route and make someone undead rather than dead-dead.  Hope that hasn't messed things up too much.  I just liked the idea of three hot and mostly naked vampiresses roaming around the ship! I was going for a three brides of Dracula vibe!

I love your writing Sandra, and would love to read more of your work.  Though some may see it as 'flowery' I'm greatly entertained by it!

Great installment Orange! I like the back story with Dana and Zadora.  Yet another twist in this already twisted maritime fable!

Quoted from Sandra E. Alffy, the rabbit is from Alice in Wonderland

Thanks, Sandra

Quoted from mcornetto Alffy, you already had your second turn a while ago. Enjoy the wedding.  But whatever you do, be careful of rabbit holes.

And Zombies that know Karate.

Sandra

OK, here it is!  Everyone is magnificently naked, and we've got a new problem to deal with.  I wanted to bring Zadora and Morgan into the mix, but pretty much ran out of room.

Hope you all enjoy!

Nicely written Dreamscale. I like it.

Let's see who's next.

Vampire sharks.  And I thought I'd seen everything.  

Well, Bush that was a nicely done second turn.

Ripley is up next --

Believe it --

Or not.  

Nice one Bush. No way I'm drinking any martinis though, magnificently naked or not haha. There's gonna be some funky cocktails getting made in that bar soon enough if we're out of turkey.

I'm still alive??!!

I know you people are afraid of me!  

Nice one Jeff... Don't look behind you....

I'm disappointed Ripley's not around anymore. I had planned to extract money from him. Oh well.

This is completely entertaining!!! I love it!!! Vampire sharks!!!! This Killer's got to get made into a movie. You know, I'm thinking about how businesses and inventions happen and they become successes and you know what the people often say when asked, "How did you come up with the idea?" A lot of times they answer, "Well, you know actually, it started out on a lark. My buddy and me we were having a few drinks and..."

The script would obviously need work, but I would love to see it; so it goes to show you we've obviously got talent aboard.

Now what I'm imagining is that Zadora has REASON FOR REVENGE!!!

Nice and juicy!!!!

Sandra