Quoted from Pard SNiK... did I mention how attractive you look today!

I'm always attractive

I'm not a revengeful type of guy - but that doesn't mean next time i won't give it a shot

Hope i wrote my scene well, since i was in class at the moment and rushed to don't make you all wait.

Cheers

Oh my, stuck in creepy haunted room with creepy pictures. How did I get into this room, I wonder. I thought I was going to the bar...now i really need a drink. lol

Cornetto...is that your 1890's frontiersman costume???  Yowser!
Ouch...I just hurt myself staring at the screen!  lol  

Just kidding.........maybe not! lol

I just read the new post...I was a bit surprised...as I'm very sure I killed Gabriel  

He swallowed a very potent poisen pill dissolved in water and I even checked his pulse in stateroom 301.

So can you kill a ghost? ;0 Oh my!

Everyone is heading for the bar...Cornetto darling...would you please put your clothes back on?

On second thought...DON'T put your clothes back on...leave that delicious picture up there for a while!

Quoted from mcornetto I have some interesting ideas for the next game.  It will be different from Killer but along the same lines.  We can discuss it after we finish this game (I'm just concerned here that we start discussing new ideas before this one is finished - everyone knows where that leads).  What I will do is create a thread where we can discuss new ideas for games and rules so we can keep them out of this specific games discussion. http://www.simplyscripts.net/cgi-bin/Blah/Blah.pl?m-1225776894/

I'm really not suggesting that anything change with how it is going...I was sharing what I interpretted the rules to mean...I'll zip my lips for now.  When we get done with this one then we can discuss our options.

Cheers!

Quoted from MBCgirl Everyone is heading for the bar...Cornetto darling...would you please put your clothes back on?

Why do I get the impression that is not the first time Michael has had that request?

I died twice. Ouch. I wonder how this is going to be explained.

Poor Alffy, that's what you get for trying to kill me. lol. A lot people are dying off quickly.  

GM and Nik, I absolutely LOVED your scenes!!!!

The visuals were excellent with the bullet that ricochets off Ste's crotch and heads towards the crystal. I could easily see this happening slow mo.

Then Yohn is "apparently" dead and I love Ste's dialogue: "Balls to this, I'm going for a drink!" Perfect!

It's now understood why Patrick had the strange dream of Sandra- there was a connection there.

The twist with Yohn still being alive- saved by his tape recorder is fabulous! It had to come in handy!

It's excellent you writing in T Joe's narcolepsy. I loved it! I just felt like I was walking on a tightrope between action and humor and I love this style.

And finally, we're back to blood thirsty Zadora- ever now pursuing the lovely Dana Orange.

Nik, I'm just so glad to see you working with the "The Room". I really feel this as something I'm drawn to as well. The POV work in the shifting perceptions of the pictures was simply fabulous and the twist when Dana says she's married and she won't tell who-- just really keeps one in a page turning mode.

I just can't compliment enough here. I really love this so much and when you ended the scene with someone approaching Dana, (must be Zadora) and now she tries to get back INTO THE ROOM. I just think it's absolutely brilliant!!!

You guys both did such an excellent job. Wow!!!!! REDRUM! REDRUM!!!!!!!

Sandra

Quoted from alffy NOOOO!!!!!! I go to work and when I get home i've got a scalpel in my eye ouchy!! By the way I think we should get this copyrighted straight away or I bet we'll soon see this on the big screen lol. I can see the reviews now, 'incrediblely hard to follow but stay with it as the complex story unfolds and it all becomes clear, oscar performances all round'. lol

I think that if some of our anchor writers who are good with storyline could pull this together, it would be truly magnificent. I'd sure go to see it!!!

I'm kind of thinking of it as a Buffy meets Strek Trek meets Love Boat adventure that keeps entering Bermuda in a reincarnation kind of cycle- and whoah! I just hope I can write an entertaining scene even if I'm just as lost on this voyage as everyone else. Too many interesting things happening- interesting characters. I love it!!!

Sandra

Quoted from Sandra Elstree. I think that if some of our anchor writers who are good with storyline could pull this together, it would be truly magnificent. I'd sure go to see it!!! I'm kind of thinking of it as a Buffy meets Strek Trek meets Love Boat adventure that keeps entering Bermuda in a reincarnation kind of cycle- and whoah! I just hope I can write an entertaining scene even if I'm just as lost on this voyage as everyone else. Too many interesting things happening- interesting characters. I love it!!! Sandra

I just realized I made a pun: Anchor Writers: Get it?! Anchor?!!!

Nic! You can't kill a ghost. In the interest of no rewrites we'll move on.   This scene will be expected to be some sort of illusion.  The tracksheet does not change. The  next person who goes will be expected to remedy this situation.  Yohn is up next.  Instead of a character scene he has a murder scene.

I am worried I may have confused Nik with having Yohn still looking for Gabriel. Yohn does not know he is dead and is still looking for him (that is what I gathered from previous posts anyway). If that is the case sorry Nik, you probably should have waited until after class to read it. When I was in school we used to draw pictures of naked women in class* can't believe you are writing scripts!

*Of course I had not idea what a naked woman actually looked like back then, we used to just guess. When the time came I was more than a little disappointed to discover women only actually had 2 breasts.

Sorry guys, i didn't mean to kill Gabriel, but believe it or not the tracksheet i had on my computer had him alive...

So i did that way.

Hope that's not a problem.

So Cornetto, I hope that you delete your internet cache on a regular basis? The last thing you need is somebody else finding tracks of a google image search for "naked sailors"

Nudge, nudge, wink, wink.

Well we can change the name of Gabriel and put another character - i still want to kill Yohn as a matter of fact hehe. Even though i don't know if it's good.