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Lake Simply - Killer Discussion (currently 14354 views)
mcornetto
Posted: July 18th, 2009, 8:28pm
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An excellent entry Jon. Well worth the wait. Loved the depth you brought to Lovisa and Tommy's characters. And the plot does definitely thicken. The map has been updated and grademan and Toby have been switched in order. Dreamscale is up next. There's still two more characters that will be leaving us this round. Will Coop be one of them?
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Dreamscale
Posted: July 18th, 2009, 8:31pm
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Jonny!! Very ambitious and well thought out. Nice back story and another killer revealed. You really did a great job of putting this all togther and tying up some good plot threads. Only negative, and trust me, I was smiling while I read the entire post, is that the dialogue was up there with the largest of noses ever. But, in the same breath, I'll tell you that I don't see another way to get as much info out (and good info at that) in 1 post, and my hat's off to you. Excellent job!
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Dreamscale
Posted: July 18th, 2009, 8:32pm
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I'll do my best, but I highly doubt anything will be ready prior to Monday evening...at the earliest...is that cool?
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mcornetto
Posted: July 18th, 2009, 8:38pm
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I think that is going to be a problem with Toby. I think I'll trade the two of you. This way he gets to take his turn before he goes on holiday.
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Dreamscale
Posted: July 18th, 2009, 8:39pm
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That's cool, but Monday evening is 48 hours, right? That's fine. Michael, I sent you an E-Mail, let me know...
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mcornetto
Posted: July 18th, 2009, 8:41pm
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Dreamscale and Toby's turns have been swapped. It's Toby's turn now.
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Tommyp
Posted: July 18th, 2009, 9:54pm
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Great entry, well done Jonny.
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The boy who could fly
Posted: July 18th, 2009, 10:34pm
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Good job, things r getting more interesting, cant wait to see what happens next.
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Toby_E
Posted: July 19th, 2009, 2:11pm
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Very nice entry Jon, really great. Hope I can follow it up with something as good! And thanks everyone who I swapped with for being co-operative
Sorry if I caused any inconvience.
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Toby_E
Posted: July 20th, 2009, 11:36am
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Got mine nearly done. Will post it later tonight once I get home from kickboxing
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Toby_E
Posted: July 20th, 2009, 3:41pm
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Got my entry finished, will post it up in a few hours... If anyone wants to read it before I post it up, PM me your email. Cheers
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mcornetto
Posted: July 20th, 2009, 4:10pm
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Hey Toby, You can send it to me if you like. I'm awake now.
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Toby_E
Posted: July 20th, 2009, 6:35pm
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Posted up, hope you guys enjoy it... Now I'm off to grab 3 hours sleep before I catch my flight to Spain! See ya.
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JonnyBoy
Posted: July 20th, 2009, 6:40pm
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Nice one Toby! I really enjoyed reading that. So another character is down...poor Mark - although I suppose he deserved it in a way. Have a good holiday - wonder how many will be left standing by the time you return?
Guess who's back? Back again?
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mcornetto
Posted: July 20th, 2009, 7:08pm
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Well done Toby. Enjoy your holiday. Map is updated. Dreamscale is up next.
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