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mcornetto
Posted: July 18th, 2009, 8:28pm Report to Moderator
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An excellent entry Jon.  Well worth the wait. Loved the depth you brought to Lovisa and Tommy's characters. And the plot does definitely thicken.

The map has been updated and grademan and Toby have been switched in order.

Dreamscale is up next.  There's still two more characters that will be leaving us this round. Will Coop be one of them?
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Dreamscale
Posted: July 18th, 2009, 8:31pm Report to Moderator
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Jonny!!  Very ambitious and well thought out.  Nice back story and another killer revealed.  You really did a great job of putting this all togther and tying up some good plot threads.

Only negative, and trust me, I was smiling while I read the entire post, is that the dialogue was up there with the largest of noses ever.  But, in the same breath, I'll tell you that I don't see another way to get as much info out (and good info at that) in 1 post, and my hat's off to you.

Excellent job!
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Dreamscale
Posted: July 18th, 2009, 8:32pm Report to Moderator
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I'll do my best, but I highly doubt anything will be ready prior to Monday evening...at the earliest...is that cool?
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mcornetto
Posted: July 18th, 2009, 8:38pm Report to Moderator
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I think that is going to be a problem with Toby.  I think I'll trade the two of you.  This way he gets to take his turn before he goes on holiday.
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Dreamscale
Posted: July 18th, 2009, 8:39pm Report to Moderator
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That's cool, but Monday evening is 48 hours, right?

That's fine.  Michael, I sent you an E-Mail, let me know...
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mcornetto
Posted: July 18th, 2009, 8:41pm Report to Moderator
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Dreamscale and Toby's turns have been swapped.  It's Toby's turn now.
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Posted: July 18th, 2009, 9:54pm Report to Moderator
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Great entry, well done Jonny.


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Good job, things r getting more interesting, cant wait to see what happens next.


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Toby_E
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Very nice entry Jon, really great. Hope I can follow it up with something as good! And thanks everyone who I swapped with for being co-operative Sorry if I caused any inconvience.


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Got mine nearly done. Will post it later tonight once I get home from kickboxing


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Got my entry finished, will post it up in a few hours... If anyone wants to read it before I post it up, PM me your email. Cheers


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mcornetto
Posted: July 20th, 2009, 4:10pm Report to Moderator
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Hey Toby,  

You can send it to me if you like.  I'm awake now.
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Posted up, hope you guys enjoy it... Now I'm off to grab 3 hours sleep before I catch my flight to Spain! See ya.


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Nice one Toby! I really enjoyed reading that. So another character is down...poor Mark - although I suppose he deserved it in a way.

Have a good holiday - wonder how many will be left standing by the time you return?


Guess who's back? Back again?
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mcornetto
Posted: July 20th, 2009, 7:08pm Report to Moderator
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Well done Toby.  Enjoy your holiday.

Map is updated.

Dreamscale is up next.
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