Quoted from mcornetto If you change it quick so that's she's covered in feces or semen rather than covered in skin.  That would work.

Ohhhh, yeahhh, please do it!


EDIT: never mess with anyone who can modify your post!

Can't help but love a kinky mod!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

DAMNIT!!!  You guys want me to change it?  Does it make a difference to everyone?
I can do it if you like...but it won't be feces or semen...it'll be blood.

Yeah, I think blood would be good. It wouldn't be a big change, but it would be a good change.

OK, I'm on it.  No more reads until it's changed, damnit!

OK, fixed and reposted.

Sorry about that...I'm having trouble understanding what's real and what's a dream.  Tried to stick with what I knew was going on for sure.  Wanted to throw old Doris in there, as we haven't seen her in awhile.  I decided against including Dennis, cause I wasn't sure where he was or what he was up to.  Sorry, but he's fair game for the next post for sure.

I think it's safe to say at this point, that we have multiple killers at work here.  Cornetto is a sly, sneaky dog...in a good way!

Don't know exactly where we're headed, but 1 thing remains constant...Lovisa gets her fair share of sex, and although the guys  (and gals) may think they're using her, it probably is actually the other way around.  The Swede gets what she's after, when she wants it.  Bravo, Lovisa!

Lots of possibilities in this next post.  Looking forward to it!!!

Hey, where is everyone?  Is this rewrite OK?

Looking forward to the next post to see where we're going to go.

Another kill, well that's 3, guess we know Lovisa is safe...lol, well for now!

My post is up. Yes, it's short. The camera didn't use much film on this one.

Gary

Another bites the dust.  Well done grademan.

ME is up next.  And who comes back from the dead will be announced.  

This game is a lot of fun! I think all of you have done a great job.

My character sure is getting a lot of action for an old broad!    I'll make sure more will come.

I have decided who to bring back to life... it'll be in a sickish sort of way too, but hey, anything goes in this story!

Good stuff Gary, some really great visuals, but as you said a tad short, for my liking... I would like more of that.

Well done...but short.

oooo someone's coming back!  should be ko0l.  Can't wait to see what happens next!

Sorry guys on the brevity on my last post. I was determined to do a visual piece with little or no dialouge. When I finished the draft, my mind was mush.

I...had...to...post...or my brain would explode.

The only graphic I couldn't get in was of Hawk's "big, hairy dick". How do you do justice except perhaps in an overlong montage?

Also, I wish I had written explicit subtext into Lovisa's and Tommy's exchange

LOVISA
I hate you!
I love you Tommy! Fuck me anytime!

TOMMY
Bitch!
And I love you! Be right over!

But maybe that's too much for Tommy and Lovisa to handle right now.

Thanks for noting the visuals!

Gary