I should be done later tonight with the next post.

So, Michael, I shouldn't have those damn spiders grow to huge sizes and start attacking the town?  Would that throw the budget off?  Damn, I guess I need to rethink things here...

Sorry to jump in here guys. i've just started reading. But the censoring of the swearing is very distracting, and takes away from the script content. Do I disable something to fix it or is it controlled by further up?

Yep.

Member Centre, then Board Settings, then tick Disable Censored Words.

Tommy...you're a geniius!  I had no idea!  Nice!  What a much better read now.  Damn, I'll tell ya, my new post is sure going to read alot better with this feature turned off.

Almost done.  Yes, Pia is back at it again!!!!!!

Oh, and one more reminder guys and girls.

- Though it might be tempting to try and create bigger and better story threads, a bigger challenge for yourself would be to stick to and develop the existing ones.  If you're going to try and add new ideas for development - keep it down to one new idea and make it clear so that those who follow will pick up on it.

OK, people, posts up!  Hope you all enjoy.  I got a little whacky, but I think it works pretty well. Sorry for not bringing all the characters in here, but next up is a storyline I didn't go after, so it can easily be brought right back in.

Map is updated.  TobeE is up next.  I wonder if his laptop is fixed?  We may have to do a switch.

I also wonder what the heck Doris is up to?  And the finger of suspicion is also cast on Lovisa (though I don't know when she'll find the time).  And what's with Dreamscale casting suspicion on Coop - maybe he just wants to be a suspect so he'll last further into the game.

Did I mention that the more we suspect you are the killer the more likely the killer is to keep you around?  The only way for the killer to survive is for you to be more suspicious than them.  

It's Hawkins!!!! He's the killer!

Great post Jeff. Funny stuff. I liked it how you killed off that minor character at the start, and at the same time made a bunch of characters suspicious.

Well done.

Quoted from Tommyp Yep. Member Centre, then Board Settings, then tick Disable Censored Words.

Thanks mate.

That is a very nasty visual in the first scene:  Tommy's pubies emerging from his budgie smugglers...

Quoted from mcornetto TobeE is up next.  I wonder if his laptop is fixed?  We may have to do a switch.

Laptop is fixed as of yesterday mate, I'm ready to write!

Excellent post Jeff!

In the beginning of your post I thought we were heading towards erotica, but two bullets quickly killed that thought.

Looking forward to the next installment.

HAHAHA Pia still hasn't left the bedroom......lol, I wonder if this is gonna be a running gag.  Things seem to be flowing pretty good though.

Got my entry pretty much finished, will post it up a bit later after I go and watch 'Public Enemies'... Lovisa finally leaves the bedroom!!!... But don't get your hopes up too much... She's still the same old Lovisa.

And the sexual exploits of Lovisa continues....if she gets bumped off what's this town gonna do for sex?  Things sure seem to be heating uo