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Lake Simply - Killer Discussion (currently 14349 views)
JonnyBoy
Posted: July 26th, 2009, 5:27pm
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Thanks, guys.
You added some new info, kept the story interesting, killed Doris and you kept it....clean!!!
Yeah, although some stuff had to be cut due to the word limit. It was originally slightly more...colourful. For instance, the first line was supposed to read:
'Everyone stares at Doris. A big drop of Christian's love-juice falls off the tip of her nose and hits the carpet with a SPLAT. ' And the scene with Lovisa and Christian ended up being about a third of its original length...let's just say Lovisa wasn't originally wearing a coat at the start.
Still, never mind!
Guess who's back? Back again?
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Tommyp
Posted: July 26th, 2009, 5:35pm
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oooooooooooooo I love it Jon. Well done, sir.
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Dreamscale
Posted: July 26th, 2009, 6:19pm
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Wow...didn't see that coming! Wild stuff.
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JonnyBoy
Posted: July 26th, 2009, 7:12pm
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Quoted from Dreamscale
Where do we go from here?
Don't say that!
The idea was to open up new avenues, not kill the game!
And I made Coop mayor!
I wanted Doris to have a resolution, some fleeting moment of happiness before she died. It's a tied and tested trick - give your character a moment of hope, maybe even a happy ending, and THAT's when you kill them off. Poor Doris.
I reckoned bringing someone back from the dead must have some side effects. Christian doesn't look too good...but just how screwed-up is he? Tommy's been away for a long time - why is he back in town?
Hopefully grademan will know what to do next. Quite sad I'm done contributing to this game...I've really enjoyed it! Looking forward to everyone's entries.
Guess who's back? Back again?
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Dreamscale
Posted: July 26th, 2009, 7:22pm
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I didn't mean that I didn't like the entry or anything like that at all. It just came as a complete surprise, and really changed the tone of everything.
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mcornetto
Posted: July 26th, 2009, 7:30pm
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Quite sad I'm done contributing to this game...I've really enjoyed it! Looking forward to everyone's entries.
You should see what I'm planning next. Hope you're around for that one.
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Toby_E
Posted: July 27th, 2009, 6:34pm
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Just letting you guys know that I'm home from Spain... It's gone midnight here, so I'm going to read all the entries tomorrow. I've got a lot of reading ahead of me!!
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mcornetto
Posted: July 27th, 2009, 6:45pm
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Nice entry grademan.
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Grandma Bear
Posted: July 27th, 2009, 6:50pm
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great entry Gary!
I personally think it's either Lovisa or Tommy, but who knows? Cornetto won't spill the beans on who the killer is.
Hope Spain was good Toby! I always loved the Spanish riviera myself and some of their islands... just wish I could remember more about my trips there.
I suddenly have a craving for Sangria...
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Toby_E
Posted: July 29th, 2009, 1:08pm
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Hey guys, just letting you know that I might have to post up my entry a few hours late today. So yeah, unless I can get my entry finished in the next 30 mins I will be posting it up a bit later.
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Toby_E
Posted: July 29th, 2009, 2:02pm
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Looks like I'm going to be able to post it early after all... Is anyone able to quickly read my entry before I post it?
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Dreamscale
Posted: July 29th, 2009, 3:53pm
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And just like that, old hairy dick Hawkins is no more.
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Grandma Bear
Posted: July 29th, 2009, 4:12pm
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Good one Toby!!
That Lovisa is sort of easy isn't she?....
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mcornetto
Posted: July 29th, 2009, 4:15pm
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Well done Toby. Loved it. Lovisa is up next.
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Grandma Bear
Posted: July 29th, 2009, 4:32pm
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I'm next?? Seems like I just posted mine!
Putting thinking cap on. Will try to go for PG this time. Got to redeem myself somehow............. HAHA gotcha!!!
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