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Grandma Bear
Posted: July 20th, 2009, 7:15pm Report to Moderator
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Toby,

sorry I didn't have time to read it right away. I was stuck in a meeting and just now got home.  


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Just read your submission Toby! Good one!

Just one question...  Was Lovisa's pink thong the same one that Christian used to wear? That would be sort of on the sick side...  


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Posted: July 21st, 2009, 4:14am Report to Moderator
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Good stuff Toby.

Poor Mark.

I would have liked to see Tommy talk his way out of jail instead of bash the woman up though.


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Another one bits the dust.  Who is this mad slasher preying on lake simply?


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Dreamscale
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Almost done...well, almost about half done.  It's coming along now.  Sorry for the delay.

Should be up in a few hours.
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What exactly are you talking about Jeff?...

A few hours to get it up???







  just messin'


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HaHa...lots of that talk in my post, actually.  Lovisa is at it again.
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OK guys and gals...we're just about there.  Need to give it another quick proof, pound down a drink, and it should be posted within the hour.

Hope you guys like it.  It's getting tough with all these different plots going on.
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Dreamscale
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OK, it's up!  I had to use an old fashioned pump, but I did manage to get it up.

Hope it works for you guys.
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You dirty minded sinner, you!  

Good job.  One slight issue, Doris did the skin thing in Tommy's dream.  Well, if we have to make it real, then it's real.

And Coop didn't go this turn, that leaves one of the other two - will it be Lovisa? Will it be Dennis?

Grademan is up next and either way he will answer that question.
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Oh boy, we got ourselves a problem.

The whole thing with Doris and wearing the skin was turned into a dream in my post.

Very funny last scene though.


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I'm glad you got it up Jeff!

Looks good. Solid, firm entry! Much appreciated...  


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Damn!  I forgot that Doris' Leatherface scene was a dream.  I tried to read everything and make sure where everyone was.  It didn't click with me about that dream scene including Doris.

What do you want me to do?

Sorry, guess I fucked up...maybe that old pump needs to be refurbished?  I always try and deliver as firmly as possible, but this entry may be a bit on the limp side.

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The boy who could fly
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hahah, always can have another dream scene


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Damn!  I forgot that Doris' Leatherface scene was a dream.  I tried to read everything and make sure where everyone was.  It didn't click with me about that dream scene including Doris.

What do you want me to do?

Sorry, guess I fucked up...


If you change it quick so that's she's covered in blood rather than covered in skin.  That would work.
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