It wasn't me who lead us down this path.

everyone is naked and doris is covered in cum, I can't wait to see what Johnny boy does with this

Dear Pia,

That was disgusting and I loved it.

Kind regards,

Tom.

Dear Pia, that was better than the daily niner!  Unreal.  We're fr beyond X rated at this point.

I'm shocked Tommy didn't get his shaved nads into that orgy with Mother and Son.

Funny stuff.  Nicely done!

You all lead me down this way...

I tried to add a new twist, Making Doris a little less deranged and then adding a clue to something totally new and different going on with Doris and Lovisa.

Anyway, I had fun writing it... I'm weird'ish I know!!

Quoted from Dreamscale We're fr beyond X rated at this point.

I guess we don't frequent the same websites....  

You never know, Pia...you just never know.

I really think for teh most part, this has been a very well done collab.

NICE JOB EVERYONE!!!!

...and it's not over yet...

Just thought I'd drop by 'Lake Simply' to see what's been happening ... Whoooah!!This is shaping up to be one debauched little holiday place isn't it? Won't be shippin' little ol' Granny off to this corner of the earth, lol!

Absolutely gross, depraved and reprehensible. Pia, I would expect no less from you.

I have an idea of what to do next. Stop me if you disagree, but I think we've pretty much written ourselves into a corner at this point. Apart from the main storyline, of course, I don't think we have anywhere really left to go. So what I'm going to do is 'reset' things, to a certain degree. Not get rid of anything that's gone before, just put us in a position where we can start the last round anew.

I know what I'm going to write, and have made a start on it. I'll have it up by the end of the day. I have a feeling that I'm going to be fighting against the word limit again!

My intention was to create some mystery about why Lovisa and Doris seem to know each other. Maybe Doris isn't who she pretended to be.

Doris has been through some strange scenarios so far and I wanted to show that maybe it's all a facade.

I still think everyone's done a great job and I've had fun reading and writing.  

I really wasn't criticising you, Pia! Your entry was great. I just think that in order to keep things moving in the same direction I'd have to try and top it, which I don't think I could do. So I'm going to try something else.

Hopefully, if this turns out the way I want it to, then it should be something quite good. I'm trying to give it the feeling of a season premiere, so the last round will really be Season 2 of 'Lake Simply'. It'll be up by the end of the day...watch this space.

I hope its up b4 i gotta go to work, im excited to see what you do johnny!

I was only trying to explain my thinking. It's hard sometimes to take what someone else wrote and follow the intended plot because we have no idea what the thinking behind it was, but on the other hand, that's also what makes this one fun.  

It's up! Hope you all like it.

Another exciting entry by Jon.  Wow! We're six months later now. And Doris is gone.  Poor gal.

Who's up next? grademan.

Great job Jon!!!

You added some new info, kept the story interesting, killed Doris and you kept it....clean!!!