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IamGlenn
Posted: May 8th, 2016, 5:19am Report to Moderator
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I've got Johnny Come Lately in my top three too. Looks like a winner.


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Me too


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My thoughts on Johnny exactly.

A complete story. Something that won't remain unappreciated.
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Quoted from AnthonyCawood
I love my mug


What is this mug you speak of?

I also have a mug. Hmm, must remember to wash it later. It's been a while. Er, the mug I mean. Not me um. No. I'm going now.

Where is my coat?

R

ps. I found it. It was in the bathroom. The coat. In the bath. Why? I dunno. I'm still looking for me shoes. They'll probably be in the fridge. Oh yes I said I was


Out Of Character - updated


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Johnny
Mother Nature
Flying high

They got my votes, in that order. If that means anything..


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MAX MAX MAX MAX MAX

YOU'RE BACK!!  Oh, I've missed you bud!!

I kept asking about you.  How are you doing?  I entered this OWC.  I'm back here on a limited basis.  Pain has been too great, but, I spend a short time on, sign off, and come back.  That's how I have to do it now...

Are you back?  PM me with your private email so we can keep in touch better!!

Dan


Hey,

I'm good man, so thanks for asking.  I'm just checking a few things out here and there, and I do plan to start writing again once I get a new laptop.

You been writing much as of late?


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Quoted from Max


Hey,

I'm good man, so thanks for asking.  I'm just checking a few things out here and there, and I do plan to start writing again once I get a new laptop.

You been writing much as of late?



My top 4 were, in order,
Johnny come lately
Erection Man
Mother Nature's Joke
The talk

Max, I'm okay.  I mean, I'm not okay, but, I'm alive and still writing.  I submitted a short for this OWC.  I hated it, but, it got a tiny bit of love, which was shocking.  I am hoping the story that I envisioned (and will be probably 20ish pages) will be much much better.

Dan


Please read my scripts:
http://www.simplyscripts.net/cgi-bin/Blah/Blah.pl?b-series/m-1427564706/

I'm interested in reading animation, horror, sci fy, suspense, fantasy, and anything that is good.  I enjoy writing the same.  Looking to team with anyone!

Thanks
Dan
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Mother Nature
The talk
Johnny

I didn't write as I rarely do
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My votes went to:

Johnny Come Lately

Googleman

SuperMick


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Flying High

Rated for laughs not story as it was a comedy theme.  Johnny got zero laughs for me funnily enough lol.


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Thank god it wasn't just myself who left it out!
Super Mick
Superchav, Innit
The Talk
Johnny was up there but not enough full blown laughs for myself...


23 Mu Muís in an ice cream van...
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Flying High Again
FM
Johnny Come Lately

1 and 3 for the overall quality. 2 for the laughs and the type of humor attempted. Most of the scripts were too light and goofy for my taste.


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I also voted Johnny as my number 1.  It wasn't the funniest, or even the best story.  But what I appreciated most was the work that the writer obviously put into it.  Really felt like multiple drafts went into that one.
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1. Mother Nature's Joke -- visually funny. I can't stop thinking of that hamster ball.

2. SuperMick -- witty dialogue, good punch lines and, of course, SuperMick flying off at the end was hysterical.

3. The Talk -- not the funniest or even that funny, but it was pleasantly humorous and was the most human out of the scripts.

I didn't vote for these scripts, but I thought they were good as well -- Flying High Again, Animal Magic, Altered Ego's and FM, which I felt had potential but just needed to be fleshed out and handled a bit differently to bring out more of its humor. Actually, some pretty disturbing subjects came up in that script.


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The talk
Mother natures joke
Johnny come lately

A few others were close

Nice effort folks.


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Inner Journey - Page Awards Finalist - Bluecat semi final
Grieving Spell - winner - London Film Awards.††Third - Honolulu
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