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Don |
Posted: May 11th, 2021, 6:12pm |
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May Challenge Round One The Intruder by Anonymous - A man is surprised to find an intruder in his house. But that isn't the end of the evening's surprises. Short, Horror Feeling Guilty by Richard Gecko - An exhausted man feels guilty about taking a break from a large-scale search. Short, Horror Through a Child's eyes by Blank - An innocent Mother/Daughter conversation leads to more than the Mother bargained for. Short, Thriller Just a Little Nudge? by The Impatient One - In the near future, a real estate developer plots how to remove an endangered species from some very expensive land. Short, Sci Fi Star Light, Star Bright by Anon - A young girl's wish to see her mother again inadvertently comes true with horrific consequences. Short, Sci Fi The Shadows by Severus Nettleship - A scared woman takes to the City's shadowy alleyways to escape her pursuer. Short, Thriller Smiler by Smiley Emoji - A man with a freakish frozen smile on his face follows a woman down a deserted side street, determined to carry out his duty. Short, Horror The Enigma Complex by Riddle Burrito - Two young urban apartment hunters are introduced to the latest style of inner city living. Short, Sci Fi Undercurrent by Teresa Green - Things aren't quite as they seem when a family man learns of a tragic accident. Short, Thriller Mind the Gap by The Smell of Ozone, Grit, and Broken Dreams - An early morning encounter on a subway platform ends in a flash. Short, Thriller The Guileless by #123 - A woman sees a little boy on an empty street in the middle of the night. Short, Horror Midnight Mangler by David Berkowitz - In a city gripped by fear, the Midnight Mangler stalks his next victim. Short, Horror What Goes Around by Ka-Bar - A killer's past catches up to him. Short, Horror Monster by XOXO - A teenage girl is pursued by a shadowy figure after an embarrassing incident. Short, Thriller ARC by Not Telling - The night shift at Heathrow's animal centre get some new guests. Short, Thriller Shuteye by Nubbins Sawyer - Noisy neighbors in the apartment above keep a man from getting a good night's sleep. If only he knew what was going on up there... Short, Horror First Born by Caustic Sauce - A man races to hospital to be at the birth of his first baby. Short, Thriller The Sensitive One by Fuzzy Dunlop - Driven to distraction, a man sets out to uncover the source of a mysterious sound only to find some noises are best ignored. Short, Horror Kidnapped by Billy Bob - A man finds himself blindfolded and tied up for reasons unknown. Short, Thriller Who Killed The Cat by I Don't Know - When the cat dies, somebody has to pay. Short, Horror The Sparkly Red Blouse by B Simmons - A young girl plays with her new dolls. Short, Horror Final Run by Written by - A quiet day in the park turns into a run for your life. Short, Horror, Thriller Swiped Away by No Name - A man digitally haunted for past sins. Short, Horror Inside Out by Also, no name - Sometimes you must obey the voice, no matter whose it is. Short, Horror Mr. Lamb by Bo Peep - A businessman searches for spirits in his Zoom meeting. Short, Horror Nothing To Fear by Also written by - A mother proves to her son the monster under his bed isn't real. Short, Horror Hitori by 16644000 - It was only Hitori. Short, Sci Fi, Horror |
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Warren |
Posted: May 11th, 2021, 6:22pm |
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So we have... 15 x Horror 8 x Thriller 3 x Sci Fi 26 Total |
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Awesome turnout. Gonna dive on in. |
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Posted: May 11th, 2021, 6:28pm |
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Starting from the top... let's do this! |
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Posted: May 11th, 2021, 6:34pm |
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Stupendously fast turn-around. Awesome job! |
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Posted: May 11th, 2021, 6:59pm |
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Posted: May 11th, 2021, 7:14pm |
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LocationThe Great Southern Land Posts7625 Posts Per Day 1.34 |
Some opinions here from you all would be good. The original idea was to drop the next challenge pretty well straight away but with this turnout I think that's not quite feasible or more to the point fair, considering the turnout of 26 is above what I envisaged. Great though! Input on how long would help. 24 hours?They're fast reads, keeps comments brief - keep a tally of your feedback/scores, so you can get your votes in fast. After Challenge 2 there will be a longer breather to Challenge 3, and hopefully I'll sync it up to the following weekend (not this weekend).Pending Don's approval of course. |
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Warren |
Posted: May 11th, 2021, 7:15pm |
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LocationSydney, Australia Posts3897 Posts Per Day 1.35 |
I'd be happy with 24 hours. |
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Posted: May 11th, 2021, 7:19pm |
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LocationTucson, AZ Posts1735 Posts Per Day 0.62 |
I can totally do 24 hours. |
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Posted: May 11th, 2021, 7:20pm |
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LocationTucson, AZ Posts1735 Posts Per Day 0.62 |
...though you may want to send an email to every writer to let them know since many expect a week. |
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Posted: May 11th, 2021, 7:22pm |
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LocationBetween Chair and Keyboard Posts1447 Posts Per Day 0.62 |
Maybe 48 hours? It would allow for people with day jobs to review more than just the minimum. |
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Posted: May 11th, 2021, 7:23pm |
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LocationSydney, Australia Posts3897 Posts Per Day 1.35 |
...though you may want to send an email to every writer to let them know since many expect a week. |
Yeah maybe we can take into account the read/review count. We don't want to be voting if some scripts have 5 reads and others have 15, just a thought. |
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Warren |
Posted: May 11th, 2021, 7:24pm |
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LocationSydney, Australia Posts3897 Posts Per Day 1.35 |
Maybe 48 hours? It would allow for people with day jobs to review more than just the minimum. |
Yeah on second thought I think 48 at a minimum. |
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Posted: May 11th, 2021, 7:26pm |
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MarkItZero |
Posted: May 11th, 2021, 7:34pm |
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Is that 24 hours just to read/vote or do notes also? |
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Posted: May 11th, 2021, 7:36pm |
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Just a reminder everyone of the genres allowed:
Genre: Horror, Thriller, SciFi |
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Posted: May 11th, 2021, 7:38pm |
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Is that 24 hours just to read/vote or do notes also? |
Just getting the general consensus at this point. I've got to duck out now so will get back to you all on time, and consult with Don (and of course what you all think is manageable). |
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Posted: May 11th, 2021, 7:39pm |
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Just a reminder everyone of the genres allowed:
Genre: Horror, Thriller, SciFi |
I knew this would come in handy
Quoted Text This is what happens when it's a slow day at work... HorrorSpeculative fiction which is intended to frighten, scare, or disgust. ThrillerFiction, having numerous, often overlapping subgenres. Thrillers are characterized and defined by the moods they elicit, giving viewers heightened feelings of suspense, excitement, surprise, anticipation and anxiety. Sci-FiSpeculative fiction that typically deals with imaginative and futuristic concepts such as advanced science and technology, space exploration, time travel, parallel universes, and extraterrestrial life. A TwistA plot twist is a literary technique that introduces a radical change in the direction or expected outcome of the plot in a work of fiction. A ShockA sudden strong unpleasant or upsetting feeling a shock of surprise. A Sting in the TailIf something, such as a story or joke, has a sting in the/its tail, it has a surprising or unpleasant part that only becomes clear at the end or an unexpected, typically unpleasant or problematic end to something. Preferably LowIdeally; if possible. Contained location, minimal characters. Aim for easy and cheap to produce with minimal SFX.https://www.wescreenplay.com/blog/how-to-write-contained-screenplay/ |
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Posted: May 11th, 2021, 8:10pm |
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At least 48 please. |
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Posted: May 11th, 2021, 8:11pm |
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I'm good with 48. |
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48 is great and it rhymes. |
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Posted: May 11th, 2021, 9:42pm |
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LocationSydney, Australia Posts3897 Posts Per Day 1.35 |
Lots of people talking about a twist not being there, but there doesn't have to be a twist...
There are subtle differences between a twist, a shock and a sting in the tail, no?
A Twist
A plot twist is a literary technique that introduces a radical change in the direction or expected outcome of the plot in a work of fiction.
A Shock
A sudden strong unpleasant or upsetting feeling a shock of surprise.
A Sting in the Tail
If something, such as a story or joke, has a sting in the/its tail, it has a surprising or unpleasant part that only becomes clear at the end or an unexpected, typically unpleasant or problematic end to something. |
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Posted: May 11th, 2021, 9:46pm |
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LocationErlanger, KY Posts4499 Posts Per Day 0.69 |
Lots of people talking about a twist not being there, but there doesn't have to be a twist...
There are subtle differences between a twist, a shock and a sting in the tail, no?
A Twist
A plot twist is a literary technique that introduces a radical change in the direction or expected outcome of the plot in a work of fiction.
A Shock
A sudden strong unpleasant or upsetting feeling a shock of surprise.
A Sting in the Tail
If something, such as a story or joke, has a sting in the/its tail, it has a surprising or unpleasant part that only becomes clear at the end or an unexpected, typically unpleasant or problematic end to something. |
I noticed this as well. Even mention it earlier in this thread. Really hope readers don't give a script a poor rating just because it doesn't have a twist. |
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Posted: May 11th, 2021, 9:47pm |
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You're correct, Warren & Zack.
Overall, the story only needs to have an impact, leave a lasting impression, whether it be shock, sting, twist. |
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Posted: May 11th, 2021, 9:48pm |
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LocationSydney, Australia Posts3897 Posts Per Day 1.35 |
I noticed this as well. Even mention it earlier in this thread. Really hope readers don't give a script a poor rating just because it doesn't have a twist.
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Seemed simple enough. |
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I'm using the word "twist" in my reviews but it encompasses all the things listed. If I say, "for me it didn't have a "twist""...that means for me it missed all 3...twist, shock or sting. Just using the word twist. |
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I'm using the word "twist" in my reviews but it encompasses all the things listed. If I say, "for me it didn't have a "twist""...that means for me it missed all 3...twist, shock or sting. Just using the word twist. |
Makes sense. |
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I'm using the word "twist" in my reviews but it encompasses all the things listed. If I say, "for me it didn't have a "twist""...that means for me it missed all 3...twist, shock or sting. Just using the word twist. |
To me, a shock ending and/or a sting in the tail is the same thing as a twist or at least falls close to under the same category. The ending of "Seven" (what's in the box), the final scene of "Silence of the Lambs" (I'm having a friend for dinner), the jump scare at the end of first "Friday the 13th", the tape recording reveal in "Michael Clayton"... though some may considered "sting in the tail", some considered shock endings, there is a reveal of some sort, which, to me, is considered a twist. |
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Posted: May 12th, 2021, 3:03am |
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48 hours plz! Mad busy at work and trying to read/review script in-between tasks. |
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Can we still score ones we've read even if we haven't commented?
Quite a few of the scripts I've read are very samey and I don't want to keep saying the same thing. |
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Posted: May 12th, 2021, 3:21am |
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To me, a shock ending and/or a sting in the tail is the same thing as a twist or at least falls close to under the same category.
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I feel like this is when someone says "my truth" but it's still not true To you that may be the case, but the definitions are subtlety different, but still different, that means they aren't the same thing. |
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Posted: May 12th, 2021, 3:21am |
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48 hours plz! Mad busy at work and trying to read/review script in-between tasks. |
I think 48 was the general consensus. A clock will likely appear when we're into the latter 24hr mark. And it looks like the next challenge may well fall close to or over the weekend. That's the plan at the moment anyway. |
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Posted: May 12th, 2021, 3:25am |
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Can we still score ones we've read even if we haven't commented?Quite a few of the scripts I've read are very samey and I don't want to keep saying the same thing. |
Max, comment on at least 10, you'll be right. You can score on any you have legitimately read. Obviously don't score on those you haven't read. |
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Wow, a lot happens while I sleep. Great turnout, I reckon I can bust out these reads this morning while I "work" from home |
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Max, comment on at least 10, you'll be right. You can score on any you have legitimately read. Obviously don't score on those you haven't read.
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Roger that! That's what I thought/hoped would be the case. I just hope there's not too many dark alley twisty turn scarers to go through. |
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Posted: May 12th, 2021, 3:31am |
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I feel like this is when someone says "my truth" but it's still not true To you that may be the case, but the definitions are subtlety different, but still different, that means they aren't the same thing. |
There are technically subtle differences imho. I think we can all agree if someone met the brief, and from what I've read so far, everyone has at least attempted the shock, twist, sting in the tail, and is being fair with their reviews. |
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There are technically subtle differences imho.
I think we can all agree if someone met the brief, and from what I've read so far, everyone has at least attempted the shock, twist, sting in the tail, and is being fair with their reviews.
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I think the vast majority definitely got there with one of the three. How affective the payoff was is a different story. |
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I feel like this is when someone says "my truth" but it's still not true To you that may be the case, but the definitions are subtlety different, but still different, that means they aren't the same thing. |
Yeah, I get that not every movie/script is going to have some kind of M. Night Shamalyan twist or like the twist in Psycho. But IMO, it doesn't have to be some kind of blind-siding reveal to be a twist. Whatever you guys wanna call it, sting in the tail or shock ending, ultimately, something is going to be revealed, suggested or have some kind of payoff and it's going to surprise the audience in some way. I consider the ending of "The Mist" to be a twist, though "technically", according to these rules of what a twist is, I guess it would be both a sting in the tail and a shock ending combined. The end of "Seven" I guess would be a combination of all the above. A twist is made to surprise or shock, isn't it? I don't know. I'm just scoring this shit on how clever I thought the stories were. If I wasn't surprised by anything or shocked by anything, the script didn't accomplish its mission, regardless of how technical we want to get with what constitutes a twist ending. |
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Yeah, I get that not every movie/script is going to have some kind of M. Night Shamalyan twist or like the twist in Psycho. But IMO, it doesn't have to be some kind of blind-siding reveal to be a twist. Whatever you guys wanna call it, sting in the tail or shock ending, ultimately, something is going to be revealed, suggested or have some kind of payoff and it's going to surprise the audience in some way. I consider the ending of "The Mist" to be a twist, though "technically", according to these rules of what a twist is, I guess it would be both a sting in the tail and a shock ending combined. The end of "Seven" I guess would be a combination of all the above. A twist is made to surprise or shock, isn't it? I don't know. I'm just scoring this shit on how clever I thought the stories were. If I wasn't surprised by anything or shocked by anything, the script didn't accomplish its mission, regardless of how technical we want to get with what constitutes a twist ending.
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I've read about 15, will try and get through the rest tomorrow.
So far enjoyed them all, it's just as I found when reading all the flash horror stories a lot of them follow similar themes and twists. It is very hard to come up with something unique in 2 pages! |
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Done
Nice effort by all
One clearly stood out above the rest for me. Voted and in!
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Read all of them last night, already sent my vote in.
There's some really good stuff here, though a big chunk of the scripts chose the same kinda twist with the pursuer becoming the victim. Didn't take off points for that though, though some did it better than others. There was one clear-cut winner for me and a few that were just a notch below.
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My votes are in, I had two favourites this time around.
Hitori had my favourite plot, if only the execution was better it would have had top marks from me. Looking forward to seeing who wrote that one |
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Got through them all.
I found that, probably because I watch too many horror movies (I'm watching one right now) and was reading so many in a row, I got really negative about overused horror tropes. Like as soon as I read that someone was being chased or someone was being haunted, I immediately got way too negative. And I seldom am that way. Weird. I got to ease up on horror being "my thing".
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Just spent the past few hours reading, commenting and scoring the entries. Scores now submitted but that was hard going. Lot's of good stories but for me two excellent ones. I have to admire how people managed to get some wonderful characters created and brought to life in a couple of days. Kudos to everyone who managed to get a story in. |
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One definitely stood out above the rest, for me. Scoring was a lot more difficult than I thought for all the others. I think there'll be a lot of tie scores for second and third place.
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Okay... read, scored, submitted.
I feel like I'm on a completely different wavelength for this challenge. I couldn't pick a stand out, half off them follow the same formula and are completely indistinguishable from each other once you've read them all.
Sure there were ones I liked more than others, but that was only comparatively.
But most people seem to be loving a lot of the content, which is great of course, I just feel like I really missed the train on this one.
I have absolutely no idea which will end on top, I couldn't even pick a top 3. That's definitely a first for me in any OWC or challenge I've been in. My top picks will generally land in the top 3 in some or other order.
I think I agree with John in that sense, there will likely be very little separating these scripts.
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When can we start guessing? |
No guessing yet, Cowboy! I have no idea why I addressed you like that. I'm half asleep. |
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No guessing yet, Cowboy! I have no idea why I addressed you like that.
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The boards are on fire... I think we need a 48hr cutoff more often |
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The boards are on fire... I think we need a 48hr cutoff more often |
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I'm working my way through. Got plenty of time still based on that timer. Tomorrow should be a light day so I can get to them all.
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So, are the writers revealed after final votes are cast? Or are the writers revealed after the other two rounds of scripts? |
In the past, in other writer's tournament-type challenges, it's been at the end of each round. |
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So, are the writers revealed after final votes are cast? Or are the writers revealed after the other two rounds of scripts? |
Delaying the reveals makes sense if we're expected to continue in the world created in the first round, but I doubt that's the structure. |
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So, are the writers revealed after final votes are cast? Or are the writers revealed after the other two rounds of scripts? |
I've been tossing this one up. Along with revealing, or not, top scorers. I'd like to see as many people as possible move on to the next rounds. After all, you might not peak in this round and go on to score highly in the next two. What do you all think? |
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Delaying the reveals makes sense if we're expected to continue in the world created in the first round, but I doubt that's the structure. |
That's one for delay. I think delay might be cool. Bear in mind the next two challenges are not inter-related. |
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I've been tossing this one up. Along with revealing, or not, top scorers. I'd like to see as many people as possible move on to the next rounds. After all, you might not peak in this round and go on to score highly in the next two.
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I personally think it's more fun to know where you stand and what you need to bring to the next rounds if you want to be a contender. I also think these tourney challenges are about endurance, they always lose some writers as they progress, if that's because people aren't happy where they stand I think that's just par for the course. Either way though, I'm here for the duration |
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I've been tossing this one up. Along with revealing, or not, top scorers. I'd like to see as many people as possible move on to the next rounds. After all, you might not peak in this round and go on to score highly in the next two.
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...Amazing turnout. And Don himself is giving notes on scripts! |
Got Bert to make an appearance too. |
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That's one for delay.
I think delay might be cool. Bear in mind the next two challenges are not inter-related.
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I wasn't trying to advocate for a delay, just stating the conditions under which one might make sense..... |
You're right. You didn't. I was like an overzealous news reporter there. Carry on. A decision will be made. |
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Yeah, not sure about a delay in reveals. But if those are the rules, those are the rules. I already rewrote mine and added an extra page and a half. Don't really want the sloppy two-paged version to be up for another month, I literally spent 15 minutes writing it and it's a mess. But if I need to wait it out, I can wait it out I suppose. |
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Yeah, not sure about a delay in reveals. But if those are the rules, those are the rules. I already rewrote mine and added an extra page and a half. Don't really want the sloppy two-paged version to be up for another month, I literally spent 15 minutes writing it and it's a mess. But if I need to wait it out, I can wait it out I suppose. |
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Maybe do something different with the scores and only reveal the top 5. That way everyone else is in the same boat and the same stakes, or so they think. Keep people at the bottom from giving up early.
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Maybe do something different with the scores and only reveal the top 5. That way everyone else is in the same boat and the same stakes, or so they think. Keep people at the bottom from giving up early.
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Maybe do something different with the scores and only reveal the top 5. That way everyone else is in the same boat and the same stakes, or so they think. Keep people at the bottom from giving up early.
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I've read them all. Great challenge Libby and Don!
Maybe do something different with the scores and only reveal the top 5. That way everyone else is in the same boat and the same stakes, or so they think. Keep people at the bottom from giving up early.
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Maybe do something different with the scores and only reveal the top 5. That way everyone else is in the same boat and the same stakes, or so they think. Keep people at the bottom from giving up early.
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Well if you reveal as you go and know your score and where you stand I think it's fun to watch maybe someone pull up from behind...like a horse race. |
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Reviewed them all. Gave one 5. Looking forward to seeing who wrote what and hopefully being able to write one for next round. My work hours are crazy, barely got this round 1 in. |
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Marnie, do another to combat the 'peen fest' as Don calls it.Well, something like that...
If it helps any, it looks like (the way things are going) the next rounds will be into the weekend writing challenges.
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Phew, got through them and voted. Pretty much all the stories and twists I'd seen multiple times (my own included) in the bunch of flash horrors I researched beforehand, which is totally understandable. So I've based my scoring on if they managed to give a new spin on well-trodden tales, as well as the writing and characters.
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Quoted from Mark Pretty much all the stories and twists I'd seen multiple times |
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There was lot of running away which lead to role reversal |
Note to self: Next time, take the first few ideas that pop into my head and throw 'em away, someone else has thought of it lol |
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Note to self: Next time, take the first few ideas that pop into my head and throw 'em away, someone else has thought of it lol
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Done and voted. While the challenge parameters looked good on paper, there is only so much you can do with a twist in two pages. It would be interesting to do another round of the same thing though to see how far we could take it. But that sounds like homework, so never mind. |
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Read them all, twice. Reviewed them all (at least I’m 99.99999% sure I did?) and submitted my votes. Had a few in the top scoring, and no script will ever get a poor or DQ vote from me cause, well… they won’t.
Anyway, fun challenge but, man, the lower the page count the more difficult it is to come up with something that fits the bill, at least for me it is, and the best direction to take the script always comes after I’ve posted, and usually somewhere between the first and second review, but never before I hit submit… kind of a Murphy’s Law thing that I just can’t escape. Curious to see who wrote what. |
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Usually, I have no problem waiting to respond to reviews for my scripts. But this time, it's really hard to bite my tongue. |
It is tough sometimes, the urge to 'set people straight and explain a few things' can be powerful. The way I try to view it is I have one shot at impressing a producer or judge in a competition and they won't reply or even read my reply to their review. All I can do is take their notes and either use them to write a new draft, or ignore them. Although this OWC isn't that scenario I find it good practise. If someone doesn't understand some of the story or finds it too similar to something else out there, that's my problem and not theirs. Still, it is nice to say a few things, even if it doesn't change anyone's opinion. |
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Keep biting that tongue, Zack.
We all know how difficult it is to not comment on our work in anon challenges.
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The other thing is this:
Recurring or similar mechanics in storylines -
Try to vote on the merits of each individual entry, how it was written, if it would make a good film e.g. be a crowd pleaser - despite being a similar concept to another re role reversal, woman/man in peril etc.
Quite a few of these would be attractive to Producers on low budgets. We'll see, anyway...
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Usually, I have no problem waiting to respond to reviews for my scripts. But this time, it's really hard to bite my tongue. It's tough, but I'll stay strong. |
I hear ya! I just read one of the most ridiculous lines of commentary on one of my scripts and want to reply so bad lol (not the most ridiculous mind, that prize goes to someone who complained there were no office phones in my script even tho there was no need for them, and my protag was deaf) |
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Posted: May 13th, 2021, 6:14pm |
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I hear ya! I just read one of the most ridiculous lines of commentary on one of my scripts and want to reply so bad lol (not the most ridiculous mind, that prize goes to someone who complained there were no office phones in my script even tho there was no need for them, and my protag was deaf)
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Ooh. That makes me nervous. I hope it wasn't me. (Please don't be me. Please don't be me...) |
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PKCardinal |
Posted: May 13th, 2021, 6:15pm |
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Done and voted.
Whew. That was tougher than I anticipated. |
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Matthew Taylor |
Posted: May 13th, 2021, 6:18pm |
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LocationShakespeare's county Posts1770 Posts Per Day 0.88 |
Ooh. That makes me nervous. I hope it wasn't me. (Please don't be me. Please don't be me...)
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Ha! It wasn't you, your comments are always spot on |
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Zack |
Posted: May 13th, 2021, 6:27pm |
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LocationErlanger, KY Posts4499 Posts Per Day 0.69 |
Voted and submitted. |
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Warren |
Posted: May 13th, 2021, 6:43pm |
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LocationSydney, Australia Posts3897 Posts Per Day 1.35 |
I hear ya! I just read one of the most ridiculous lines of commentary on one of my scripts and want to reply so bad lol
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Can you really blame the reader for their interpretation of your script, I mean in general? I also get somewhat frustrated at the comments, but largely ignore the ones I disagree with, however I don't blame the reader for having a specific opinion, each to their own. I think another reality is that people potentially hammer through the scripts and subtlety or themes may be missed. Again I don't blame the reader for this, this is a free challenge with people offering their thoughts freely. I'd be more upset if a paid script reviewer missed something that was completely obvious, but here you get what you paid for. |
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Cacutshaw |
Posted: May 13th, 2021, 6:57pm |
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In my script I'm very guilty of people misunderstanding it. I'm totally to blame.
I cut a or shortened a couple lines so it could make the 2 page limit, and I now realize I should've cut other ones. |
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FrankM |
Posted: May 13th, 2021, 7:07pm |
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LocationBetween Chair and Keyboard Posts1447 Posts Per Day 0.62 |
In my script I'm very guilty of people misunderstanding it. I'm totally to blame.
I cut a or shortened a couple lines so it could make the 2 page limit, and I now realize I should've cut other ones. |
A saw more than once people cut FADE IN and FADE OUT to cheat on space. Thanks for taking the high road |
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Cacutshaw |
Posted: May 13th, 2021, 7:28pm |
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A couple of my Transitions definitely took a hit too |
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Warren |
Posted: May 13th, 2021, 7:29pm |
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So at the very least I'm guessing we can start guessing in 3.5 hrs? |
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ReneC |
Posted: May 13th, 2021, 7:33pm |
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A saw more than once people cut FADE IN and FADE OUT to cheat on space. Thanks for taking the high road |
No. You don't need to have them, just like you no longer need CUT TO: between every scene. Screenwriting is evolving. But of course you can still include them. |
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ReneC |
Posted: May 13th, 2021, 7:34pm |
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I hear ya! I just read one of the most ridiculous lines of commentary on one of my scripts and want to reply so bad lol (not the most ridiculous mind, that prize goes to someone who complained there were no office phones in my script even tho there was no need for them, and my protag was deaf)
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I hope it was me. |
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Cacutshaw |
Posted: May 13th, 2021, 7:43pm |
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Probably me. I was going through so many in a row I was becoming a regular Ebert on a bad day. |
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Zack |
Posted: May 13th, 2021, 7:58pm |
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LocationErlanger, KY Posts4499 Posts Per Day 0.69 |
So at the very least I'm guessing we can start guessing in 3.5 hrs? |
Bring it on. |
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LC |
Posted: May 13th, 2021, 8:05pm |
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I'm waiting on clarification on a couple of things from Don.
Plus a few stragglers remain with their votes to come. Get 'em in guys! You know who you are. |
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LC |
Posted: May 13th, 2021, 9:04pm |
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Warren |
Posted: May 13th, 2021, 9:09pm |
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Done and Done |
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FrankM |
Posted: May 13th, 2021, 10:54pm |
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LocationBetween Chair and Keyboard Posts1447 Posts Per Day 0.62 |
Five minutes left... are we still actually waiting on anyone? |
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LC |
Posted: May 13th, 2021, 10:58pm |
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A few, yes. Hurry up slowpokes. |
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Matthew Taylor |
Posted: May 14th, 2021, 1:10am |
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LocationShakespeare's county Posts1770 Posts Per Day 0.88 |
Can you really blame the reader for their interpretation of your script, I mean in general?
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No not at all (I'm used to that from how Vacuum performed in the last challenge lol) The one I'm talking about was just a ridiculous comment at the end of their review (but I've now slept since reading it so it's all good lol) |
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Matthew Taylor |
Posted: May 14th, 2021, 1:22am |
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I hope it was me. |
It was you!!! Just kidding I love your reviews of scripts (not just on mine) they are very insightful and it's clear you've actually read the scripts carefully |
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