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Posted: January 31st, 2009, 8:54pm Report to Moderator
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Sorry about this but I'm struggling to now fit a kill into the scene. I will succeed though, I will succeed.

Jeff, the bridge is Rainbow Bridge. I'll try to edit my scene by tomorrow but let me know if it's badly effecting your thoughts and I'll hurry it up.


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That's why I was asking which bridge it was...so basically, Conrnetto is saying that they cannot be on the Rainbow Bridge yet...right?
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That's why I was asking which bridge it was...so basically, Conrnetto is saying that they cannot be on the Rainbow Bridge yet...right?


Yes, they're on a mystery bridge, but not the Rainbow Bridge.

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Ste alrady said it was teh Rainbow Bridge.  Now I'm even more confused.

Happy Super Bowl Sunday everyone!!!!  AAAYYYEEEEEE!!!!!!
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It's been derby day today, so I'm pretty drunk. Don't really want to rush a kill for the scene so if it's okay with everyone I'll just sort it out tomorrow.

Jeff, send me a pm if you want to know who will be no more.


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Sandra Elstree.
Posted: February 1st, 2009, 1:56pm Report to Moderator
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Ste alrady said it was teh Rainbow Bridge.  Now I'm even more confused.

Happy Super Bowl Sunday everyone!!!!  AAAYYYEEEEEE!!!!!!


Yes, Steve said it was the Rainbow Bridge, but I thought Michael just said he wanted to save it for the end- the grand finale.

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I did want to save the Rainbow Bridge for the finale, but if you guys have another idea then I'm willing to listen.
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Posted: February 1st, 2009, 8:41pm Report to Moderator
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I did want to save the Rainbow Bridge for the finale, but if you guys have another idea then I'm willing to listen.


How about in the Rainbow Bell tower?

The Flower Clock?

I think it's smart to end on The Rainbow Bridge, but there could be preliminary action elsewhere.

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There can be action anywhere but the Rainbow Bridge.  It's been set up for the finale since the first scene.

Hey Ste, how's things going?  Sorry there was a bit of a mix-up.   It's a bit tougher at the end of things, isn't it?    
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OK, I've changed it so there is now a kill. Sorry about it but it is really hard to change the scene as it is.


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No worries Ste.  Cheers for taking care of things.

EDIT:  George is going to be devastated.  Though I could tell you reluctantly decided to go for the kill because of the shocking manner you used to do Wolf in.  Good job!

Dreamscale is up, I'll edit the tracksheet after I finish work for the day.
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OK guys, I'm on it.  Still a little coudy from the big game yesterday, though.

I'll do my best to get something up by Wednesday afternoon...earlier if possible.

Good job Ste!  You ending actually helps me, as I have some ideas.  I'm going to to PM you with a few questions though, so I understand exactly where we are at ths point.
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I hated to see Wolf go...I liked the big burly outdoors man...can I keep Timber????   

It's a little excruciating right now....I feel like I'm sitting on my hands waiting for the hammer to drop


Good job Ste!  Damm those head devouring snakes!


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No worries Jeff, I'm off to bed now, but will reply in the morning.

Sorry George, but somebody had to go.


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Sorry MBC, but I think Timber has to go, as he lives and dies with Wolf.
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