Quoted from mcornetto Interesting turn Yohn, out of curiousity who was killed?

In your original email to me, you said my scene was to be a build scene and I had to use my kill... but then you sent a follow up email, saying my scene was chaging to an introduction scene... I misinterpreted the email and thought that meant I wasn't to do a kill in my scene, that it was purely introduction.  My apologies.  I can re-write if you like, or you'd you'd rather pass the kill to the next person that's fine also.

Good job Yohn...love the inner struggle as well...

I am excited to write my part after Dana...just waiting to see if I need to use any tie in there.

Looks like the snakes are appearing and Cordelia's shrill scream still has an affect.   Cool!

Quoted from Pard In your original email to me, you said my scene was to be a build scene and I had to use my kill... but then you sent a follow up email, saying my scene was chaging to an introduction scene... I misinterpreted the email and thought that meant I wasn't to do a kill in my scene, that it was purely introduction.  My apologies.  I can re-write if you like, or you'd you'd rather pass the kill to the next person that's fine also.

No worries. Your email was full of massive information and lots of twists and turns.  As long as you aren't unhappy that you missed the kill, then you don't need to update it.    We can make up the body count later.  

On the other hand if you want to take the kill and update it you can.  So, let me know and I'll hold off on giving the heads up to the next person in your tribe until you finish making your changes.      

I've added the kill in if that's cool with everyone.

Wow. Bye-bye Bruce. Wish we'd have gotten to know him better.

Nicely done Yohn.  I was sort of waiting for Orange to post before I updated the tracksheet.  I'll wait until later today and if she hasn't posted by then I'll update it.

I'm going to post within the next hour. Sorry it's taken so long...

edit: Okay, I just posted. Sorry it's so long again, hope everyone likes it.

edit again: Also ,I meant to post this earlier but I couldn't find a good link so, i finally ended up going onto youtube. Just in case I got the whole dun nuh's wrong in the scene I posted, here is the song that Michael is humming. Again, sorry about ths video but this is the only thing i could find close to what i was looking for because i dont know what the actual tune is called or if it even has a name..

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=s6MG1DI6d9U

That was positively lovely orange.  Well done.  Poor Father Holmes - we knew him well.  MBC is up next and I'll have the tracksheet updated in a few.

This had all the right elements. Really well done Dana!!!

Sandra

Tracksheet is updated and emails are sent.  These are the last three turns before Niagra.

I'm going to be hot on the heels of Dana   I'm almost done...just need to see if Dreamscale has some time to read through it...it's Saturday night after all.

Should be up by morning.

Well...it's not quite morning...lots of football today...Cardinals are going to the SUPER BOWL! Hurray!!

So my ssssasssy SHIVA group...my post is up.  I will send my challenge to Cornetto.

Hope you enjoy the ride in the candy apple red Barchetta!  It was my challenge.   Thanks Dreamscale!  I loved it!

I wanted to develop Sam's character...sorry there is so much action, but she's by herself so there's not a lot of talking.

She also had to connect with the Detroit Tribe in this post, so I had to move Eddy south so I didn't have to double back in order to meet up with the D-tribe leaving the store.  

Eddy - Alffy...sorry dude...I had to do a kill too...so had to payback for Albert   

Anyway...enjoy all!

Excellent post MBC!  Seriously, well done.  Probably my favorite post so far in this script.  Sam sure made a transformation and I really like the new Sam (even better than the old Sam, who I also liked).  Looks like she's ready to kick some ass.  You really tied everythign together nicely and everything flowed very well.

Great job!!!!!

Hey MBC,

Nicely done.  I thought you tied up that segment well in preparation for your new position in the Detroit tribe.

As a note Detroit tribe, Samantha is now part of your tribe.

I'll update the tracksheet when I get home from work.  

Cheers.  

Close to finishing. Wow! How quick it went. I gotta start preparing my scene. Hope you guys enjoy it.