Quoted from Grandma Bear You're in the corridor Gabe. I agree you haven't been used much so far. Maybe that's because people never notice writers.   I thought M was the only one dead...

Yikes. Guess I didn't do that good a job of murdering T then.
Or, was he one of those writers too?

I didn't utilize B in mine so he could be a suspect for T's death.

Sorry to see M gone, but she went out doing someone or something she loved.

Good piece, Zane. You lucky bastard, living in Humboldt County.
Love the area, have friends I visit regularly in Arcata.
Always head over to Eureka and hang at Lost Coast for some brews.

Dug U's line about making it to the final act. Slick.
Good on you for mixing some debauchery with your blood!

Regards,
E.D.

Things seem to be heating up, good stuff, gotta feeling everyone is gonna be dead by the time the train leaves Iowa.

I was suggesting someone explain how I'm talking to the other characters. It's like a vanishing act. lol. I now we have new players here but it's kind of funny. lol. One second I'm in my room and then I'm in the corridor.

Ain't that true pia.   

The greatest trick the devil ever proved was making the world believe he didn't exist. I will survive this yet. lol.

@ ED yeah good times at lost coast and six rivers. I'm here another 2 yrs b4 transferring.
EDIT: Just re-read T's death idk how I forgot lol. But his body has not been discovered in men's head yet. Someone has to go sometime.

@ Mr. Ripley you got moved at end of dreamscales's by U calling everyone to dining cary. Then u left with E in mine... have to get that script produced... if you survive

Gah! I've been so busy at work that I totally missed all the action!! Crazy exciting around here

I'm T, was killed first and my body has been moved to cold storage.

Quoted from mcornetto Anyways DJS is up next.

I shot it over to you for a look, Mike.
So, folks, if all is right, you shall see it soon.

Good deal cant wait to see the direction it takes.

Nice entry DJS - You put a lot of U into it!  

ReneC is up next.

Will update soon.

EDIT: Everything is updated.

First U faceplanted a monitor and now his lair done got vandalized.
We just rolled past Detroit, shoulda graffiti tagged the monitors too!

The gents is a popular place.
Remember to wash you hands after you discover a corpse.
And don't eat the swordfish!

E.D.

Quoted from Electric Dreamer First U faceplanted a monitor and now his lair done got vandalized.

Just to be clear, in ZaneJ's entry (before mine) U threw his cane at the monitor, then it was to the next scene. I implied that U accidently (or intentionally?) smashed the monitor as a result. That's also why I also did a variation of a line 'They will pay'.

After posting, I edited it to give one extra line to C so folks are clear that I didn't kill C, but that X has Xs in his eyes.

Hey DJS, were the lines spoken by 'B' meant to be 'Z' in the conversation with 'Y', it looks like B takes over the last few lines?
Was this a mistake or am I missing something lol?

Very nicely done, Darren. I figured that X was going to be next.

Re the game:

What I'm starting to wonder is this:

If "I", the real "I", (not the dead "I") is supposed to be the killer, then what is his motive? Since, U is supposed to (by his bio) be the one out for pay-back, wouldn't M, (if her fainting spell had something to do with recognizing him from a previous time of being "the bad guy" (which is all I could discern) wouldn't she have shouted something out to alert everyone? Even if not a sure threat, but a potential one?

Sandra

Quoted from darrentomalin Hey DJS, were the lines spoken by 'B' meant to be 'Z' in the conversation with 'Y', it looks like B takes over the last few lines? Was this a mistake or am I missing something lol?

It was a bit confusing as to who's who and who was where. I made a simple edit for clarity. It was, in fact Z. The revision makes more sense ("You want to come down to cold storage?") since Z is in the next scene and Y is not. (Y passes the offer). The idea I was planting was to have suspicion on both Y and Z.

@Sandra
I figured since we can't see the killer kill, I deduced that the next vic would die of food poisioning, and if they had a "history" of substance abuse that increased the risk.

"I" isn't there/been seen on the train for some time. The killer, I thought, would divert attention away from himself/herself by pointing the finger to someone nobody can account for. ..even though "we" know I is DOA

Sent to Michael to review before I post.

ETA: Posted